Really know me…

I try to resolve mistakes in five blog of my classmates. But it’s too harder for me because I make all the time a lot of mistakes. And that represents a dangerous flaw, because I don’t distinguish the good of the evil, the right sentence of the wrong sentence.

But I have tried, and that give that :

 For Ikram :

I think you can use the word “instead” in your sentence “May you write WALL-E’s sound design in sted of “the sound design of the movie WALL-E” ?”.

It’s may be more correct, but it’s only my trying to resolve you mistake. I don’t find much of it.

That all the mistake that I see because I make a lot of mistakes myself and I don’t rectify my own.

In the title, the letter ’s’ after ‘projects manager’ is may be in excess.

For Jordan :

 I found the same mistake like Gabrielle. But I don’t think really is a mistake. It’s just for me a difference of context and an understanding between Gabrielle and Jordan.

The other text are extracts of works in class, and they don’t have any mistakes.

For Joris :

I don’t detected any mistakes in the posts of Joris. But I found just one post, I don’t found the other posts.

But the post with the visual effects is very  complete, the links are very interesting. I think that I will hear the podcasts on the visual FX. No mistakes, but quantity of information.

For Julie E. :

I found a blog where has been clear out of the mistakes, Gabrielle and Joris has find all the mistakes. And Julie was very reactive, and rectify immediatly this mistakes.

For Julie T. :

I just seen the transcription of the Linguist. No mistake at the horizon.

P.S. : Sorry for the mistakes in these sentences.